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Ben Walther's avatar

Great read! Thanks for sharing!

Neal O'Grady's avatar

glad you liked it!

Kristen Brady's avatar

Excellent post. I subscribed, shared, recommended, and will take your advice!

Neal O'Grady's avatar

thanks so much Kristen! hope it helps :)

Miller Bolo's avatar

@Neal you nailed it with this piece. It's a masterpiece that will last a life time.

This will always be my referral piece when writing hooks.

Neal O'Grady's avatar

that really makes my day to read that. thanks so much

Ryan Musselman's avatar

@Neal O'Grady hey champ, so glad to see you’re here.

Deepjoy Ghosh's avatar

An absolute masterpiece. Very detailed & very informative. Will keep an eye on your next posts. ;)

Neal O'Grady's avatar

Thanks Deepjoy!

Francesca Phillips's avatar

This was a fantastic read thank you for making this!

Ian Ferguson's avatar

Practicing what you preach here, super valuable thanks! I've saved this for inspiration.

Claudia Faith's avatar

really useful, saved for later! thank you, Neal!

Salvador Lorca 📚's avatar

Good insight 😌 Can i translate part of this article into Spanish with links to you and a description of your newsletter?

Neal O'Grady's avatar

Yeah totally! Thanks for asking

Success Louis's avatar

Awesome 🔥🔥

I learned a lot

AhmadBjoe's avatar

Wow. Thanks for the Hook breakdown. Honestly I'm troubled to create hook for attention grabber.

In the last month my post views on threads drop almost 60%

AI Sparks's avatar

A mediocre post with a great hook will always beat a great post with a mediocre hook. Nobody gets to read the rest if the first line doesn't grab them.

Marketing Insider's avatar

Amazing post. subscribed you.

Nesibe | AI Governance Expert's avatar

The contrast/surprise hook is the one I keep coming back to. Subverting the obvious expectation in the first sentence earns the reader's attention without having to work too hard. Good breakdown.

Matthew Blackwood's avatar

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